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-Overall, the page looks really good! You guys did a great job of incorporating videos, pictures, and links that were all relatable onto the page. The content makes sense and is explained well. The information looks good and is organized really well, which makes it easy to read. Although, one thing that you could guys could to improve would be to use in-text citations. It's great that you have your sources listed at the bottom of the page, but maybe you should cite where you found each piece of information in the text where you mention it. +Overall, the page looks really good! You guys did a great job of incorporating videos, pictures, and links that were all relatable onto the page. The content makes sense and is explained well. You guys did a great job of explaining the positives and negatives of social media and how they are affecting us in different ways. The information looks good and is organized really well, which makes it easy to read.  
 +Although, one thing that you could guys could do to improve ​the page would be to use more in-text citations. It's great that you have your sources listed at the bottom of the page, but maybe you should cite where you found each piece of information in the text where you mention it. This could also improve the page because it will show readers where you got the information,​ (credible sources) to draw your conclusions from.  ​