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bilingualism_language_acquisition_draft_feedback [2011/04/16 20:31]
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bilingualism_language_acquisition_draft_feedback [2011/05/11 21:11] (current)
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   * It looks like you have a very good organization here. just be sure you tie the information together with some kind of intro on the main page and first subpages (it looks like you left space for this)   * It looks like you have a very good organization here. just be sure you tie the information together with some kind of intro on the main page and first subpages (it looks like you left space for this)
   * cite your sources in-text, where possible   * cite your sources in-text, where possible
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 +====== round 2 comments======
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 +  * I like that you've made your questions into links. I might move them up toward the top of the page, though, or otherwise incorporate them into your introduction
 +  * your pages on the two main theories of bilingualism are very good, but you might want to introduce or summarize them on the linking page and compare/​constrast them
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 +--- //​[[evan@evanbradley.net|Evan Bradley]] 2011/05/11 21:07//