Organization: You have obviously worked on this page, and the organization reflects this. I think it is very clear, and very easy to follow. Your links are clear, and provide the information that they claim to possess.

Clarity: I would look at the “lying and creativity” and “lying and improvisation” pages. I think there might be more that you could say, or perhaps present it more clearly. Right now, it's hard to read and the list of sources adds to the confusion. I understand it's a work in progress, but that's what I noticed at this point. I'm sure it will be fixed by the end of the term. I might include some of your own views and opinions in these sections as well. Since there isn't much research, maybe provide a hypothesis. I don't know what Professor Bradley thinks, but I think it could help. In addition, I would go in depth with the example of the baboons. I think that this could tie directly into humans and their lies. Since we are both primates, this would give another solid example. I really liked your flower example. That was really cool to learn. I think you guys are doing a great job, you seem to be right on track!

Content: Your sources seem to help discuss your topic, and seem relevant. Like I said before, just look at your “lying and creativity” and “lying and improvisation” pages. Try to clarify what you have found and what you are trying to say. Add some pictures here and there.

P.S. Picture of Pinocchio? Best. Idea. Ever.