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Organization: You have obviously worked on this page, and the organization reflects this. I think it is very clear, and very easy to follow. Your links are clear, and provide the information that they claim to possess.

Clarity: I would look at the “lying and creativity” and “lying and improvisation” pages. I think there might be more that you could say, or perhaps present it more clearly. Right now, it's hard to read and the list of sources adds to the confusion. I understand it's a work in progress, but that's what I noticed at this point. I'm sure it will be fixed by the end of the term. I might include some of your own views and opinions in these sections as well. Since there isn't much research, maybe provide a hypothesis. I don't know what Professor Bradley thinks, but I think it could help. In addition, I would give the example of the