Organization: I felt like this wiki was very well organized; I had no trouble finding any information and it was all interesting. I agree with my groupmates about the fact that the Major Theories section sounded a bit like background info…maybe you could play around with the title, or go further into the theories.

Clarity: I feel like I learned a lot about stuttering just by reading this first draft! I can't wait to see what you include on the other links on your page that haven't been created. Everything seems to make sense to me :)

Content: I agree with my groupmates about maybe adding some pictures. Have you thought about possibly adding some sound samples? Or examples of transcription in IPA of a stutterer's speech? That could be very interesting. I thought all of the information was well presented and easy to understand, however you could explain a bit more about Van Riper's Tracks… the information you provide for it seems a bit general.

Overall, awesome first draft!