**Organization**
  • I liked how the main page was easy to navigate, but the research question could stand out a little more.
  • The Background Information page was very informational and gave great basic information about stuttering. Maybe you could add pictures for some “fun”?
**Clarity**
  • I liked how you used bullet points, it makes your page easier to read.
  • I was a little confused why the Major Theories page was called that, because I thought the information on that page would better be suited on the Background Information page or some other sort of page.
  • Parts of the phases were a little difficult to understand. Maybe you could make a chart/table with all the models to make it easier to read?
**Content**
  • I like how you included the different models of the different phases because it really explains how stuttering manifests throughout the lifetime. But I think you could go into more detail about Van Riper's Four Tracks.
  • Maybe include more information about effects on language development
  • You might want to go through each page and look for grammatical errors.
  • I really liked your Treatment page, very informative and great layout!
  • I think you found a lot of great information on stuttering!