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communication_disorders_draft_comments [2011/04/24 18:36]
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 +====== Round 2 ======
 +This project is coming along; just a few suggestions:​
 +  * I like how you've phrased "what we want to know", but it would be good to add a short list of specific questions/​facts you want to establish
 +  * I would suggest adding some more prose to the front page to introduce the various sections/​subpages - this will tie things together better
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 + --- //​[[evan@evanbradley.net|Evan Bradley]] 2011/05/14 20:20//
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