You have made a lot of progress on this page, but you need to move quickly to turn it into a final product! I would start with an introduction—right now the subheadings do not make a lot of sense without something tying them all together. You also have some links to subpages at the bottom of your main page, but it's not clear how they fit in with everything else. You will need to take information from your sources and incorporate it throughout (with citations, of course).

Evan Bradley 2013/05/28 10:17