Organization: I really like how this is organized. Everything is easy to read, easy to follow. The pictures are placed well on the pages (they fit in with what is written and add to the clarity of what is being talked about).

Clarity: Everything is written clearly; it is easy to understand. You did a good job teaching about language acquisition of multiple languages!

Content: There is a lot of information and it is informative for the reader. Make sure to include the year when studies were published (On the language proficiency page and the dual language system hypothesis page there were some authors that were mentioned, but there were not always years mentioned). Also, there was a typo on the dual language system hypothesis page (weather)