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feedback_from_liz_karina_michele_christine_and_anh [2011/05/04 08:55]
levims [Organization]
feedback_from_liz_karina_michele_christine_and_anh [2011/05/04 09:05] (current)
anguyen [Content]
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   * The introduction is phrased a little awkwardly. Maybe try to engage the reader a little more from the beginning!   * The introduction is phrased a little awkwardly. Maybe try to engage the reader a little more from the beginning!
   * On pages where there are just links to more pages, put a paragraph to connect the links together   * On pages where there are just links to more pages, put a paragraph to connect the links together
 +  * Under your 'Topic of Interest'​ you have small statement under each topic to explain the main content of that topic, you might want to try to add a sentence to your interest topic "baby sign" just so that you stay consistent. ​