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group_feedback [2011/04/22 22:48]
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group_feedback [2011/04/22 23:00]
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 --- //​[[jlbacon@udel.edu|Jessica]] 2011/04/21 21:00// --- //​[[jlbacon@udel.edu|Jessica]] 2011/04/21 21:00//
  
-  * I really like this topic choice! I like the idea of having a list of 10 things to know about ASL. A suggestion is that your morphology section is a little bit short and it seems interesting,​ so I would like to see more information in that category. ​Also, have there been any relevant studies done on ASL? I would be interested to hear about one or two of them if they have been done. This seems like a great project and I am looking forward to hearing more about it!+I really like this topic choice! ​ 
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 +__Organization__ 
 +  * I like the way the first page has all of the links to the information right in front of you and my only suggestion would be to combine the profiles into one group. 
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 +__Clarity__ 
 +  * I like the idea of having a list of 10 things to know about ASL.  
 +  * I also thought you had great examples on the syntax page and were really helpful. 
 +  * I wouldn'​t mind to see a few pictures like the one in your outline throughout your project. Visuals are always helpful in explaining something in the text and are also good attention grabbers. 
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 +__Content__ 
 +  * A suggestion is that your morphology section is a little bit short and it seems interesting,​ so I would like to see more information in that category. ​ 
 +  * Have there been any relevant studies done on ASL? I would be interested to hear about one or two of them if they have been done.  
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 +This seems like a great project and I am looking forward to hearing more about it!
  
 --- //​[[amszecsi@udel.edu| Ally]] --- //​[[amszecsi@udel.edu| Ally]]