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group_feedback [2011/04/22 22:48]
amszecsi
group_feedback [2011/04/24 19:02]
kbillips
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 --- //​[[jlbacon@udel.edu|Jessica]] 2011/04/21 21:00// --- //​[[jlbacon@udel.edu|Jessica]] 2011/04/21 21:00//
  
-  * I really like this topic choice! I like the idea of having a list of 10 things to know about ASL. A suggestion is that your morphology section is a little bit short and it seems interesting,​ so I would like to see more information in that category. Also, have there been any relevant studies done on ASL? I would be interested to hear about one or two of them if they have been done. This seems like a great project and I am looking forward to hearing more about it!+I really like this topic choice! ​
  
---- //​[[amszecsi@udel.edu| Ally]]+__Organization__ 
 +  * I like the way the first page has all of the links to the information right in front of you and my only suggestion would be to combine the profiles into one group. 
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 +__Clarity__ 
 +  * I like the idea of having a list of 10 things to know about ASL.  
 +  * I also thought you had great examples on the syntax page and were really helpful. 
 +  * I wouldn'​t mind to see a few pictures like the one in your outline throughout your project. Visuals are always helpful in explaining something in the text and are also good attention grabbers. 
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 +__Content__ 
 +  * A suggestion is that your morphology section is a little bit short and it seems interesting,​ so I would like to see more information in that category.  
 +  * Have there been any relevant studies done on ASL? I would be interested to hear about one or two of them if they have been done.  
 + 
 +This seems like a great project and I am looking forward to hearing more about it! 
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 +--- //​[[amszecsi@udel.edu| Ally]]// 
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 +I had no idea that ASL had such an independent structure from spoken English. 
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 +__Organization__ 
 +  * The individual embedded pages were very well organized, but the home page is a bit cluttered 
 +  * If you try to condense your pages into Profiles, Project, Feedback ect. it would  be easier to navigage 
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 +__Clarity__ 
 +  * The individual pages were very well structures and very clear 
 +  * Some video clips to demonstrate would be nice if possible 
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 +__Content__ 
 +  * I am also looking forward to more about the morphology of ASL, so I hope that will be elaborated on in future revisions 
 +  * Regarding syntax, I'd like to see more details on how ASL differs from its spoken counterpart 
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 +You are off to a great start and have a very interesting topic. I'm looking forward to learning more! 
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 +--- //​[[kbillips@udel.edu| Kim]]//