Differences

This shows you the differences between two versions of the page.

Link to this comparison view

katie_s_comments [2013/05/15 18:06]
kbultman created
katie_s_comments [2013/05/15 18:14] (current)
kbultman
Line 1: Line 1:
-So overall, it is a nice start. I think it would be good to explain each of the different types of improv in more detail since most people probably don't know much about them. A youtube video of each would really help your page because it shows people what each one is. The section about transmitting and influence for the improv was sort of confusing. I'm not sure where you were going with it or how it related to your topic. Some more expansion and clarification on that section would be something that can help your readers. Its a good start guys. Really like the table of contents. ​+So overall, it is a nice start. I think it would be good to explain each of the different types of improv in more detail since most people probably don't know much about them. A youtube video of each would really help your page because it shows people what each one is. The section about transmitting and influence for the improv was sort of confusing. I'm not sure where you were going with it or how it related to your topic. Some more expansion and clarification on that section would be something that can help your readers. Overall content is ok, but there could definitely be more. Sources seemed to aid in the research, but maybe find a few more? There may be an ethnomusicology book in the library or in the Con that could really be of some use. Its a good start guys. Really like the table of contents. The navigation on the page was nice, and it seemed to flow well