round 1

You have added a lot of really great content to this page! This mainly consists of isolated bits and quotes, so the next step here is to add some prose and headers to start to tie it together.

In terms of structure, think about whether the major page divisions you have are the most logical way to present this to the reader. I would suggest moving some of the Lying and Creativity and Lying and Improvisation pages to the front page, and linking to the other content as necessary from there.

Evan Bradley 2013/05/14 14:10

round 2

This project is progressing nicely. The page is getting a little long, so you might consider splitting it off into subpages.

Evan Bradley 2013/05/28 13:29