1. There was plenty of information about the topics they covered, however it was very dense. There was a lot of information jammed into each subheading.
  2. There weren't a lot of links to their information in each of the headings.
  3. The bibliography didn't conform to APA style. The authors weren't in alphabetical order.
  4. They could have used more subheadings as a way of splitting up the information they had, that way it wouldn't looks so dense. It would have better flow when actually reading it, and it wouldn't seem overwhelming.
  5. The “old pages” section seemed odd, and some of those links did not work.