You have added some good content here. You still have a lot of work to do to change it from an “outline” to a finished page though. Instead of just stating a topic and description, create an introduction that really explains the purpose of the page to the reader. Organizationally, you should put your content on the main page. You may want to split some content off into sub-ppages so you can elaborate on each section (with adequate citations)

Evan Bradley 2013/05/28 13:26