• Organization: This wiki page is very well organized. I think each heading flows nicely into the next; information is presented in a way that it builds upon the previous heading. I do think the “Theories and Findings” heading could be added under a different heading, or expanded upon a little more. All of the other headings have a lot of content to them, so the “Theories and Findings” one sort of gets lost in the information.
  • Clarity of Explanation: The organization aids the information's clarity. Everything is described clearly. There were a few typos/grammatical errors I noticed while going through the page; I fixed the ones I noticed, so that's just something to be aware of. Overall, the page is not too difficult to read, but it still manages to include a good deal of interesting information.
  • Content: I love the inclusion of the clip from Meet the Fockers! All of the informational content is relevant and informative. I think including some visuals or more videos would make the page more engaging for the reader.


  • Organization:I like the structure of the page. My biggest issue is the giant red box around the video at the top of the page. Other than that it is smooth, clean, and easy to read.
  • Clarity of Explanation: Like I said, everything is solid heading wise and makes it easy for the reader to browse the different topics.
  • Content: More pictures or videos would make it a big easier on the eyes rather than different text walls. The content is solid and provides the reader with information related to the topic. I liked the part about how children learn words are bad by their parents as well as the information about IQ and cursing.