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peer_review_for_categorical_perception [2011/04/20 09:39]
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-  * Unordered List ItemThe ​different pages and subdivisions are very helpful+  * The different pages and subdivisions are very helpful
   * We would like bigger font, or for the most important and basic information to be bolded (or stand out in some way). This might help a reader understand your text and know what to focus on.   * We would like bigger font, or for the most important and basic information to be bolded (or stand out in some way). This might help a reader understand your text and know what to focus on.
  
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-  * Unordered List ItemThere ​should be a clear and concise definition of categorical perception presented first on that page. We think that it would be beneficial to present the basics before going more in depth into technical information. This might help an outside reader understand your information.+  * There should be a clear and concise definition of categorical perception presented first on that page. We think that it would be beneficial to present the basics before going more in depth into technical information. This might help an outside reader understand your information.
   * For example, we liked the first (bolded) part of your phonetic sound contrast page, because it clearly states the goal of the section. You might want to consider using this page as a model for your other sections.   * For example, we liked the first (bolded) part of your phonetic sound contrast page, because it clearly states the goal of the section. You might want to consider using this page as a model for your other sections.
  
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-  * Unordered List ItemWe ​liked your definition page, but consider incorporating some of those definitions into the actual text, to help the reader follow the information as they read. The page that you have could still serve as a glossary, but try to find a balance between including the most important and complicated definitions throughout the text.+  * We liked your definition page, but consider incorporating some of those definitions into the actual text, to help the reader follow the information as they read. The page that you have could still serve as a glossary, but try to find a balance between including the most important and complicated definitions throughout the text.
   * Great use of figures and graphs! ​   * Great use of figures and graphs! ​
   * The topic seems well researched. It looks like you are following your outline as planned!   * The topic seems well researched. It looks like you are following your outline as planned!