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peer_review_round_2_-_meaghan [2010/05/07 12:09] (current)
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 +Hello!
 +I really like the way you've set this up - I like the titles for your sections and the metaphor that goes along with it. I also particularly like your intro section - where you talk about what you're going to do and where the project is headed. It gives one a good idea of what to expect. I also like the link between emotions and culture!
  
 +Of course you're not done yet, but I like how you've set up your structure so even though the pages aren't necessarily done yet, I can see where you're going.
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 +I would probably want to see more on the theories - a bit more elaboration on those, but that's more of just me being interested in it...it might not be relevant to the cog sci part of the topic - I'm just interested in that stuff!
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 +I think you've done a great job so far, especially with you being the only one working on this!