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reed_s_comments [2013/05/21 20:29] (current)
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 +I love the layout and overall look that you have for your page! It makes sense and has a nice progression to it. Obviously expanding each heading/​topic will be an area to spend some time on, but I think you have some great sources and topics covered. I like that you are exploring specific uses of improvisation in different culture (e.g. flamenco guitar) and I hope you continue to flesh those areas out. 
  
 +One suggestion for the organization of your page -- Maybe the heading "Forms of Improvised Music" should fall before "​Learning and Transmitting Improvised Music"?​ This way you could start broad and narrow in as the sections continue. Just a thought. I look forward to reading more about different forms of improv around the globe! ​