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sarah_s_critique [2010/05/14 12:30] (current)
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 +Hi Jes - Sorry this is late. I really like the way you approach the reader as if you're engaging them in an interesting conversation... it makes it more engaging to follow along while you outline different arguments. One suggestion I have is to make (even small) headings for some of your paragraphs. The paragraphs are long with a lot of information in them, and it would be easier to navigate through the page if there were indicators of what information is where. The affective-emotion and emotional-affect page sounds like it could be really interesting,​ so I'm looking forward to reading it!