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synaesthesia_feedback_2 [2010/05/07 18:03]
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synaesthesia_feedback_2 [2010/05/18 16:22] (current)
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 great work! this is really coming together. I would still recommend adding a prose introduction on your main page. Also some of the information on different pages might be a little redundant (e.g., "​defining synaesthesia"​ and "​qualities of synaesthetes"​). I would also recommend making the theories of synaesthesia a little more prominent, and integrating them with the experiments you discuss - you have a page of "​experiments",​ and then also discuss experiments in other sections - an Experiments page might not be necessary if you discuss each experiment on the page for the topic it most relates to (and then use a link if you want to mention it elsewhere). great work! this is really coming together. I would still recommend adding a prose introduction on your main page. Also some of the information on different pages might be a little redundant (e.g., "​defining synaesthesia"​ and "​qualities of synaesthetes"​). I would also recommend making the theories of synaesthesia a little more prominent, and integrating them with the experiments you discuss - you have a page of "​experiments",​ and then also discuss experiments in other sections - an Experiments page might not be necessary if you discuss each experiment on the page for the topic it most relates to (and then use a link if you want to mention it elsewhere).
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 +== Followup ==
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 +Hi Group,
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 +thanks for addressing the earlier comments - you have definitely improved the page! The only thing I would add is that it might be nice to add some more summery to your main page to introduce the topics - such as the section listing the various theories, or to create a page which would summarize and compare the theories - it's important to know why there are different theories, and where they differ.
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 +Overall I am very impressed with the diversity of information in here - well done!
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