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wiki_page_review [2014/10/17 09:43]
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-This page is really well put together. ​ I really liked the use of videos on the wiki page and plan to keep that in mind as we continue to build our own page.  I'm sure there are TED talks about news and information that would be relevant. ​ I also liked the layout of the page.  I had previously thought the wiki page would be mostly in bullet points, but this page read quite easily and was well structured. ​ It helped change my view of how I thought our page would look, and so, offered more options for what our final page will look like. +This page is really well put together. ​ I really liked the use of videos on the wiki page and plan to keep that in mind as we continue to build our own page.  I'm sure there are TED talks about news and information that would be relevant. ​ I also liked the layout of the page.  I had previously thought the wiki page would be mostly in bullet points, but this page read quite easily and was well structured. ​ It helped change my view of how I thought our page would look, and so, offered more options for what our final page will look like.  Under the "​Improvisation and Lying" subheading, they present information about neurological studies looking at how the brain works while using improvisation in lying. ​ However, they then mention this information was found on a .com domain and that a neuroscience write mentioned was later in involved in a plagiarism ​ scandal. ​ The information presented is relevant, but including that little disclaimer afterwards seems "​sketchy"​ (for lack of a better word) and they may have been better not including it at all, or searching for more scholarly articles related to that topic.
  
 **__Reese__** **__Reese__**